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[Name]
[Address in a few lines]
[Phone no.]
[e-mail address]
[Date]
Personnel Manager,
Personnel Department
ABC Bank,
[Address in a few lines}
Dear Sirs,
Application for the Post Teller (Yr. Ref. [ ])
With reference to your advertisment on [name of newspaper]/[webiste if you find the advertisement on internet] dated [date]. I would like to apply for the post of teller.
I have 15 years of working experience in the banking industry. I worked in various departments o f XYZ bank from [year] to [year] in XYZ bank and as [state the posts], details of which are shown in my curriculum vitae.attached. I resigned from XYZ bank on [date] so as to [give reasons here].
With my extensive knowledge of banking work, I am confidnet that I am the right person you want.
My curricum vitae is attached for your consideration. I shall be avaiilabe for an interview at any time you want.
Yours faithfully
[Signature]
[Name]
Note ;
1. You need to fill in the data in [ ].
2. The answer provided by 001 is very poor. You are suggested to choose my answer of to wait for a better one so as to impress your propestive employer.
2010-04-09 11:23:22 補充:
Sorry. Words "in XYZ bank and" in second line of second paragraph are redundant and should be deleted. The correct sentence should be
'...from [year] to [year] as ...'
Besides, your contact details should be at the right hand side and the title 'Applicaiton for ..' should be in the middle.
2010-04-09 11:29:36 補充:
The grammar of 001 is terrible. If you adopt his answer for your job application, the boss will just throw it into a rubbish bin. You should either choose my answer or to wait for a even better one because there are many knowledgeable persons willing to help.
2010-04-09 11:30:29 補充:
By the way, don't blindly believe those experts (masters, doctors, experts) because many of them are poor in English themselves.