English writing pls correct it

Why are you learning English. (This is correct but 'Why do you learn English' may be better.)

I think English is not easy to learn,even i have been learning it so long,unfortunately my English still poor.But why am i keeping to learn English,it is just only one reason, if i want to get a high salary, i must have good English communication skills.

English is difficult to learn. Although I have learned English for xxx years, my English is still poor. Nevertheless, I shall keep on learning English because a good English communication skills is pre-requisite for getting a high pay job.


In my future,i wish to have good English communication skills.Using English as my daily life also no communication barriers.For making my hope to be true learning English can not stop ,give up

I wish my communicaion skill can be enhanced to a hgih standard in the future such that it will not cause any communication barrier in my daily life (comment : would it better use job?). To achieve this target, I shall keep learning English.


Maybe my wish need to spend long time to success,but it is worth

It is worthwhile even though I may need to use (or spend/ take) substantial time in the learning. (Note : This sentence should be put together with the last paragraph.


Pls help me to correct it.

garylokp,
It should be 'skilfully', not 'skillfully'
Please note that it is single 'l'

You are asked why you are learning English, but you have exactly three short points in your essay addressing the question: (1) you want to get a high salary, (2) you wish you have good communication skills, and (3) your hope to be "true learning English". #3 is not a real point anyway.

Learning English is not easy to me. Even I have been learning for long time, my English standard is still poor. The only reason for me to keep on the way is to get higher reward. I have to get English communication skills well known.


In the future, I hope I can communicate English skillfully and find no barrier in my daily life. To make my hope come true, I cannot give up

It may take a long period of time to let my wish become succeed but it is worthwhile to do so

你原文中太過冗長及太多重覆，而且有些地方用詞方不當，我嘗試用你原來意思去修改

2010-04-05 10:35:05 補充：
更正 :
let my wish become successful 或者 let my wish succeed