第一次作英文日記，請幫我睇下錯漏。

Dear Diary:

Today was a strained day, I had a English test. I woke up at 10:30am, I feel I am so lazy these days, I need to change this bad habit.

I arrived school at 5:00pm by light rail. The first class is not English so I had a lesson to prepare for the test.

The exam was pretty hard but I hope I can get a good grade.

2010-03-30 03:55:17 補充：
The first class WAS* not English

Dear diary:

Today was a strained day, because we have English test in school.In the morning, I got up at 10:30am it was so late. I think I am so lazy. I will need to change this bad habit.

In the afternoon I went to school at 05:00pm by light rail .The first lesson is not English so I had lessons to prepare my test.
Second lesson was falling, I was very hard to complete the paper.

I hope I can get a good grade.

Good night my dear diary.

Dear diary, (you don't put a : in English journals or diaries)

Today was a strained day and the weather was cold. I had an English tetst.
This morning i woke up at 10:30am and i was late for school. I need to improve
my bad wake up habit so i won't be late again.

Thi afternoon, I went to school at :00pm by the light rail. Nevertheless, the first
period wasn't English, so i had one period to study and review the test.

The test was in second period. The test was hard and i did my best to
complete it. I hope i would get a good mark.

Good night, dear diary.

**i don't really understand some of the sentences you were saying (no offense), but i did my best correcting your work. Just one reminder that the WHOLE
diary should be written in PAST TENSE because everything already happened.
**Good luck with your journal writing! :)

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Dear Diary,

I felt strained because I had an English test today. I woke up at 10:30am. Feeling I have been so lazy these days, I decided to change this bad habit.

I went to school at 5:00pm by light rail. The first period was not English so I had a period to prepare for the test. The test was in the second period. I found it difficult to complete the paper. I still hope I can get a good grade though.
Good night my dear diary.