英文diary“Ocean Park”

Last sunday, my classmate and me went to Ocean Park.

At the morning , i went to kwun tong McDonald's waited my classmate,
but tong was delayed to McDonald's, therefore we were delayed 20minute to started.

Moreover , we by number of 629 bus to Ocean Park, i had chinned with my friend along the way. At 10o'clock we arrived to Ocean Park.
We queued to bought admission ticket.
In addition, we played Merry go round , Ferris wheel and Roller coaster.
after i had played the Roller coaster, i felt dizzy.

At noon, we had lunch at "The Bayview Restaurant".
There had lobster , pasta , salad , strawberry cake.
i thought the strawberry cake was delicious.

After the lunch, we visited aquarium.
There had many many rare fish.For example, clown fish , shark and demon fish.
i felt excite at the moment.
Afterward, we visited Panda House, i saw the panda "yingying" and "loklok".
i felt really glad.

At sunrish, we by bus went back to home.
i though that day can got me cheer.

2010-03-27 23:57:31 補充：
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Last sunday, my classmate and me went to Ocean Park.

In the morning , i went to McDonald's in kwun tong wait my classmate,
but tong was delayed to McDonald's, therefore we were delayed 20minute to start.

2010-03-27 23:57:44 補充：
After that , we had take 629 bus to Ocean Park. I chatted with my friend along the way. At 10o'clock we arrived to Ocean Park.
We queued to buy admission ticket.
In addition, we played Merry go round , Ferris wheel and Roller coaster.
after i had played the Roller coaster, i felt dizzy.

2010-03-27 23:57:52 補充：
At noon, we had lunch at "The Bayview Restaurant".
There had lobster , pasta , salad , strawberry cake.
i thought the strawberry cake was delicious.

2010-03-27 23:57:59 補充：
After the lunch, we visited aquarium.
There had many many rare fish.For example, clown fish , shark and demon fish.
i felt excite at the moment.
Afterward, we visited Panda House, i saw the panda "yingying" and "loklok".
i felt really glad.

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