請幫我改這幾句英文

我想訂明天七點,六位?

Could I reserve a table for 6 people tomorrow?

I would like to reserve a table for 6 tomorrow night at 7:00.
May I have a table reservation for 6 at 7:00pm tomorrow?
兩款都可以。
你漏了時間！

你們餐廳有沒有提供泊車服務?

Do you have a car park?你的答案是「你們有沒有停車場？」

代客泊車是valet parking.
Do you have valet parking?

這是免費嗎?

Is that free?Is it free of charge?
你的答案不可以是錯，只是不是一般外國人說法。因為問Is that free?通常是問一些推廣贈品才用這問法。


你能夠為我們推薦一些主菜嗎?

Could you recommend our some main cause?

Could you recommend some dishes for us?
雖然從字面看好似問他們介紹碟子，但這是英文講法。假如你不習慣堅持用你用詞，也要改正為：
Could you recommend some main COURSES (p.) for us.
some...跟眾數給我們/為我們是for us.


我能夠同你一起吃飯嗎?

Could I have lunch with you

Could we have lunch together

ok啦。但試下唔好用could.

May I have lunch with you?會有禮貌好多。一個字make the difference.

但Could we have lunch togther則不能改為 May...，因為問法是平等地位「讓我們一同吃午飯」，而不是問「我可否加入你那邊的飯局」，英語人說話有時對場合和處境是很細緻的。我看你原文好像是「你想加入人家，要人家倍你」，所以應該用客氣一點的一句：May I join you for lunch?


當然可以,但我二點鐘前一定要走及AA制.

Of course , but I must leave before 2 o’clock and we must pay the bill separately.Of course, but I have to leave by 2pm and we will go Dutch.[這是傳統英語]或
Of course, but I have to leave by 2pm and we pay for our own.[這是美式講法]

另外如果不是預先講明，到時埋單才計，可以說：Let's split the bill.

這是你第一堂課嗎?

Is this your first lesson ?

Correct!

什麼時候我會收到下一期支票呀?

When will I receive the next time check?

When will I receive the next check?
要看你的check是甚麼。
分期付款的叫installment.當你是收數那方。
退款的叫refund.當你是客戶。
這題你必須要好specific.

1. May I reserve a table of six at sever tomorrow evening?

2. Does your restaurant have valet parking?

3. Is that free?

4. Would you recommend us some main courses?

5. May I have lunch with you?

6. Sure but I have to leave before 2pm and let's go Dutch.

7. Is this your first lesson?

8. When shall I receive the next cheque/check?