Q:In recent years, domestic violence is on the increase in HK.Write an essay about this, proposing ways of dealing with it.
Domestic violence, which is family violence.Do you konw that there are many domestic violence in Tin Shui Wai?Many of this case were happened in the poor.
In recent years, the prices of commodities was increasing, cause the poor had a heavy burden in their lives.And this burden would make them to lose their temper easily and vent in their family members.The reason behind that their earnings was low,but they need pay much to buy they need which cause them have high pressure.If they can't handle this pressure, maybe they would do something crazy,such as hitting their family members.
Moreover, some umemployer who is middle age in the majority will spend their save to bet.In the gambling house,if they loss,they can borrow a huge number of money to bet.It is disappionted that they do it.But if they loss thismoney,they need carry the heavy debt.Also,they would had a large mental load since they had owe a great quantity of money.This load make them get mad easily and then hurt their family members.The tragedy will coming on in that time.
In these two ways,the poor or other people should control their emotion and relax. If they have some problem which is difficult to solve, they can talk with their family.Not only talk with family members in the problem,but also chat with them in the life.It can make them get along weel with family members.On the other hand, they should find some activity to relax,like singing karaoke,swimming,playing badminton and so on.
Control emotion and relax,people can leave the domestic violence and have a happy family.
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2010-03-25 9:42 pm
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2010-03-25 11:05 pm
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One of the most important domestic violence is family violence. Do you know there are lots of domestic violence in Tin Shui Wai?Many of these cases were happened in the poor.
Recently , the prices of commodities was increasing which cause the poor had a heavy burden in living . And this burden would make them losing their temper easily and vent in their family members.One of the reason is that their earnings was low, and they need to pay more to buy they needs which creates high pressure on them . If they cannot handle this pressure, they might do something crazy, such as hitting their family members.
Moreover, some umemployed who are in their middle age will mostly spend their saving to gamble . In the betting house, if they loss, they may borrow a huge number of money to bet again. Unfortunately when they lose their money, they will carry a heavy debt. In addition , they would had a large mental load since they had owe a great quantity of money. This load make them get mad easily and they may hurt their family. Tragedy will coming on in that time.
In these two ways, the poor and also other people should control their emotion and relax. If they have problem and it is difficult to solve, they can talk with their family. They may also chat with them always. It can make them get along weel with family members.On the other hand, they should find some activity to relax,l ike singing karaoke,swimming,playing badminton and so on.
Control emotion and relax, people can leave domestic violence and have a happy family.
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2010-04-03 11:12 pm
One of the most important domestic violence is family violence. Do you know there are lots of domestic violence in Tin Shui Wai?Many of these cases were happened in the poor.
Recently , the prices of commodities was increasing which cause the poor had a heavy burden in living . And this burden would make them losing their temper easily and vent in their family members.One of the reason is that their earnings was low, and they need to pay more to buy they needs which creates high pressure on them . If they cannot handle this pressure, they might do something crazy, such as hitting their family members.
Moreover, some umemployed who are in their middle age will mostly spend their saving to gamble . In the betting house, if they loss, they may borrow a huge number of money to bet again. Unfortunately when they lose their money, they will carry a heavy debt. In addition , they would had a large mental load since they had owe a great quantity of money. This load make them get mad easily and they may hurt their family. Tragedy will coming on in that time.
In these two ways, the poor and also other people should control their emotion and relax. If they have problem and it is difficult to solve, they can talk with their family. They may also chat with them always. It can make them get along weel with family members.On the other hand, they should find some activity to relax,l ike singing karaoke,swimming,playing badminton and so on.
Control emotion and relax, people can leave domestic violence and have a happy family.
Recently , the prices of commodities was increasing which cause the poor had a heavy burden in living . And this burden would make them losing their temper easily and vent in their family members.One of the reason is that their earnings was low, and they need to pay more to buy they needs which creates high pressure on them . If they cannot handle this pressure, they might do something crazy, such as hitting their family members.
Moreover, some umemployed who are in their middle age will mostly spend their saving to gamble . In the betting house, if they loss, they may borrow a huge number of money to bet again. Unfortunately when they lose their money, they will carry a heavy debt. In addition , they would had a large mental load since they had owe a great quantity of money. This load make them get mad easily and they may hurt their family. Tragedy will coming on in that time.
In these two ways, the poor and also other people should control their emotion and relax. If they have problem and it is difficult to solve, they can talk with their family. They may also chat with them always. It can make them get along weel with family members.On the other hand, they should find some activity to relax,l ike singing karaoke,swimming,playing badminton and so on.
Control emotion and relax, people can leave domestic violence and have a happy family.
2010-03-26 10:45 pm
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