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Dear Mary,
首先GAMMER係一個「老太太」或你的老「老婆」,grammar才是文法。
實在有太多要改,重寫還要快,請自行參詳錯處,改進你的文法(有些只是中學的tense),另外中文的寫法有些重復,商業上而言內容並不太精明的「對亦」手法,不過只按你想講的照譯吧。
最後一段出現Mary,但這信已是給Mary的,是「你」收信的Mary和另一個Mary之間出了問題,還是怎樣?這個你要自己先弄清楚。看來他們公司有兩個Mary?
Refer to our phone conservation last week, we have neogtiated the unit price of your product. Also you should offer the bulk prices according to previous orders based on your MOQ (3K per model), shouldn't you? During the negotiation, we have told you we need to discuss with our customer to determine the quantity of order. However, Ms. A told us by phone this morning that even reaching MOQ, you are unable to stand on the previous prices but offer a revised rate of the prices. We really hope you can maintain the previous prices for us and not to adjust them.
In addition, you mentioned it was Mary and a gentleman of my company that negotiated the prices; however, we don't have a male sales person in my company. There may be a misunderstanding between you and Mary on this. Could you clear this up and sort out the details with Mary...