我想問呢轉passive vioce 時時間副詞從尾轉去頭得吾得?有冇錯?
例:You must take all the medicine after a meal
I change it to: After a meal, all the medicine must be taken by you
My classmates said: all the medicine after a meal must be taken by you
exmple2. YOu should send your application by march 22
I change it to: By march 22, your application should be sent by you
My classmates said: Your appliucation by marvh22 should be sent by you
有冇分別呢?exam 出的會否扣分呢?
I have one more question
People used this old machine to make poper many years ago
can i change to : Many years ago, paper is maken by people which used this old machine.
轉passive vioce 一問
2010-03-13 7:50 pm
回答 (4)
2010-03-13 8:27 pm
✔ 最佳答案
例1:這個例如明顯不是個好例子..不覺得怪怪的嗎?
一餐後,所有藥都一定要被你服用-.-?
還有的是,after sometime/doing something,之後的一定要有subject
這個是present participle.
例2:
個人認為用submit比send好
date是先數字後月份
你已經提到"your",所以後面不用"you"
除非你強調是由你去完成個application
最後,通常日期放在前或後,所以你說的比較好
例3:
什麼是poper,是否paper?
你轉成passive voice的句子寫得不太好.
make的過去或及過去分詞都是made,不會有maken,要要與take混淆.
轉成passive voice,時間不定一要放在前面的
另外,我認為用複詞比單詞好,畢竟不是只有一張紙才用這部機器造出來嘛.
Many years ago, papers "were" made by using this old machine會較好
(留意tense啊~)
照你原句,
Many years ago, paper was made by people "who" used this old machine.
是who不是which,people是人來的,不是物件
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最後,我想問呢轉passive vioce 時時間副詞從尾轉去頭得吾得?有冇錯?
我在上面已經答了,時間放在前或後都沒問題
2010-03-13 12:28:40 補充：
第一句打錯字
例子,不是例如==
2010-03-13 12:31:41 補充：
常打錯字喔-.-
make的過去 "及" 過去分詞都是made,不會有maken,"不" 要與take混淆.
2010-03-13 12:32:04 補充：
轉成passive voice,時間不 "一定" 要放在前面的
2010-03-13 23:45:46 補充：
This machine was used by people to make paper many years ago.
其實by people都可以不說=.=
paper應是papers
2010-03-14 7:38 pm
2010-03-13 8:48 pm
你classmate的兩句都只是識得用規則來砌句字，不真正英文，反而你的改法似番真正英文，我唔知你那subordiante改動考試會否扣分，但我是評分員就不會扣。
但假如怕扣分，應該這樣寫：
All the medicine must be taken (by you) after a meal.
Your application should be sent (by you) by March 22.
(_)的字在真正英文是不需要的，但考試造句便可能要。
注意passive voice只是變動個動詞，情境的附屬部份是不用改動的，假如如你classmate那樣把verb的前後全段調動，我是他老師便知道他仍未學懂英文，只是在砌積木。
最後的問題，我的答案會是：
This machine was used by people to make paper many years ago.
留意全句的主verb是use，不是to make paper。你和一些回答都直覺提重心投在紙被製造，但原句只是的動詞重點是人用了這機器。
考試時要留心那個才是「主動」的「動詞」，按這動詞把事態的主角變為受角才是正確的改動。
另外你的句式還有些verb的問題-原句是past tense，被動句亦是依從是用past tense。
希望令你更清楚掌握英文文法的變化和注意事項。
但假如怕扣分，應該這樣寫：
All the medicine must be taken (by you) after a meal.
Your application should be sent (by you) by March 22.
(_)的字在真正英文是不需要的，但考試造句便可能要。
注意passive voice只是變動個動詞，情境的附屬部份是不用改動的，假如如你classmate那樣把verb的前後全段調動，我是他老師便知道他仍未學懂英文，只是在砌積木。
最後的問題，我的答案會是：
This machine was used by people to make paper many years ago.
留意全句的主verb是use，不是to make paper。你和一些回答都直覺提重心投在紙被製造，但原句只是的動詞重點是人用了這機器。
考試時要留心那個才是「主動」的「動詞」，按這動詞把事態的主角變為受角才是正確的改動。
另外你的句式還有些verb的問題-原句是past tense，被動句亦是依從是用past tense。
希望令你更清楚掌握英文文法的變化和注意事項。
2010-03-13 8:27 pm
兩個都ok..但你既答案較清晰及強調"after a meal/ by March 22"
after a meal/ by March 22都係一d prepositional phrase. function似adv咁用。
People used this old machine to make paper many years ago.
應改為:
Many years ago, paper is made by this machine which people used. (強調由機器整)
OR
Many years ago, paper is made by people with this machine.(強調由人整)
after a meal/ by March 22都係一d prepositional phrase. function似adv咁用。
People used this old machine to make paper many years ago.
應改為:
Many years ago, paper is made by this machine which people used. (強調由機器整)
OR
Many years ago, paper is made by people with this machine.(強調由人整)
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