[求助]英文文法一問

會，仲係書連電腦都被人偷埋。如果你書同電腦唔係一齊買點解你要話 books and computers 呢? 究竟你原本想講乜先？你應該用中文將你原本想講o既野講一次先，咁先可以幫你糾正架。

2010-03-11 22:53:56 補充：
我見你 computer 後面有 s，係咪上個禮拜買左好多部電腦? 如果好多部電腦應該話 Those computers I bought last week，如果只係一部電腦就應該話 The computer I bought last week got stolen with the books. 咁樣講會清楚 D

以上網友所修改之語句我沒有意見, 但有一點眾人沒有點出, 我當然知道 are stolen by someone 是 passive voice, 文法上沒有問題, 只不過by someone這兩句字是多餘的 (redundancy), 應該可以省略, 除非你指名是甚麼人偷去, 舉個例子

A glass is broken (by someone) 杯子不會自己打破自己, 當然是被人打破, 所以這句子中by someone跟本不需要

A glass is broken by brother 這句子中by brother不能省略, 因它指明是甚麼人打破杯子

The computer(s) which I bought last week including the books were stolen by someone. 我上星期買那一部電腦,,,包括那些書,,,全被人偷去.


跟本computers bought.已經是大錯特錯,電腦怎能買東西?
一是 passive voice = was bought last week by someone.
物品是要( 被人)買回來才合理.

1)The computers
bought last week (together with/and) the
books are stolen by someone.

2)The books,
(together with/and) the computers bought last week, are stolen by
someone.

The books, together with computers bought last week, are stolen by someone .

2010-03-15 13:21:04 補充：
那些書籍連同上星期購買的電腦被人偷了.
The books, together with the computers which were bought last week, are stolen by
someone . ( the two words "which were" can be ommitted.)

那些書籍包括上星期購買的電腦被人偷了.
The books including the computers bought last week are stolen by someone.

The books, and the computers bought last week, are stolen by someone.

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The book and computers bought last week but the computers are stolen by someone.