請問句子有冇錯20點

這句子很正確.

Mary escaped..(vi)......................瑪莉逃走咗

dressed..(past participle as adj. 不要誤會是V.)..(被)打扮成....." 所有['過去分詞]均有被動功能.

as a man.................................好像男人一樣.

2010-03-10 06:55:38 補充：
無必要再修改.

應該有錯。英文很少見到這種句子結構。
就連中文意思也不清楚，更難評論此英文。

如想說「瑪莉著到成個男仔咁逃走。」
應該寫成Mary dressed like a man and escaped.

如想說「瑪莉逃走果陣時著到成個男仔咁。」
應該寫成Mary dressed like a man when she was escaping.

如果想說「瑪莉逃走。佢仲著到成個男仔咁添。」
應該寫成Mary escaped. And she dressed like a man as well!

Mary dressed like a man when she escaped

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escaped 同 dressed 都係main verb
1句句子只能有1個main verb
可用comma或conjunctions分隔

建議:
mary disguised herself as a man and escaped.
mary escaped in disguise.

我諗呢句會好d
Mary dressed like a man when she escaped