✔ 最佳答案
1.menu
I think you should be serve some popular food and drink
because these food and
drink attract many people .for example,
French fries, ice-cream, hamburger,
coffee ,
organic drinks.
> be serve 是「唔鹹唔淡」的文法。You serve ... (active voice) / ... is served (passive voice).
> some popular food and drink: 你知道餐廳現在提供的食物和飲料是不受歡迎的麼？又或者，你認為甚麼是受歡迎的呢？
> drink 要寫成 drinks，因為是可數名詞，在這裡作泛稱用。
> 句子前段已寫了food and drinks，所以在後段該用代名詞they，而非再去重覆名詞。
> attract many people: 這個也寫得很牽強。幾多才是many people？做生意的，希望吸引的是「顧客／customers」，而非「人」，所以用people不夠準確。
2. decoration
I think if restaurant can play
music and watch tv is so good. If the
restaurant can offer sea view. I would like to a lot of people like to
go this.
> decoration 是指「佈置」；播音樂、看電視、和有海景跟佈置有甚麼關係？
> Watch tv寫錯了，因為是客人，而非餐廳，去看電視。
> If the ... sea view都寫錯了， if是連接詞，你只有上句，漏了下句。
> 餐廳的地點不是固定的麼？如何可以「找」個海景？
> like to go this: 甚麼是"go this"？Go 是intransitive verb，不可以有direct object，所以一定不可以接上this。
3. extras
If the restaurant can offer takeaway and credit
card services. The restaurant should be install air-condition for
customer.
> If... 跟句二的錯處一樣。
> offer credit card services 該是寫錯了，除非你是指餐廳去發行信用卡。若你的意思是收信用卡，你該寫成：and accept credit cards.
> should be install 跟句一的錯處一樣。
> air-conditioning 才是正確的是名詞用法
> customers，非customer， 因為這裡是泛稱，要用眾數。
