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Dinosaurs were fierce ferocious creatures .
I hope wish I can't wouldn't see them.
Nothing Nobody could be live alive when if they see found you.
Or So you may should run as fast as you could.
So Or you can get out from their eyes sight.
All Most of the dinosaurs were strong.
Unluckily Unfortunately they were all dead extinct
Rude Ferocious dinosaurs were all disappeared.

這問以下兩句哪句較正確，為什麼:
Ice-creamis his favouritefood because it is good taste. (incorrect)
Ice-cream is his favourite food because it tastes good. (correct)

Remark : Italic and underlined words are to be substitued by those words in red colour.

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對不起要講一句，沒有那句是對的。

Dinosaurs were fierce.
fiece是adj形容詞，踓然意思正確，但形容詞最好的寫法是：
Dinosaurs were fierce animals.

I hope I can't see them.
改正：
I hope I won't see them.

Nothing could live when they see you.
這句我明你是想說當牠們見到你便死梗
You won't survive if they see you.

Or you may run as fast as you could.
So you can get out from their eyes.
這兩句是連接一起的句子，應改寫為：
You may run as fast as you can to get out of their sight.
或其實你現實上假如牠已經看到你，你上面的意思是走不掉的，不如這樣改為：
The best way to survive is to avoid being seen by them.

All dinosaurs were strong.
這句不明來由。
建意你把這句放在第一句，成為
Dinosaurs were strong and fierce animals.

Unluckily they were all dead
Unluckily用錯了，你要認清你是站在讀者作為人類覺得牠們已死是「不幸」unluckily還是「慶幸」luckily；還是你是站在牠們那邊覺得牠們消種是「不幸」，你這樣獨立一句，我沒法知道。但按你下句的意思似乎是：
Luckily for us, they are all dead and no longer exist (disappeared) now.

Rude dinosaurs were disappeared.
最後一句的rude是人性他的描述，但牠們真如你所說的「粗魯」(rude)嗎？請留意用詞的意思。


另外回答這句正確：(雖然文法正確，但英語人不會說ice-cream是food的)
Ice-cream is his favourite food because it tastes good.