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The two newspaper clips are (all)[you don't really need the word here] about health and diseases. One of them is about the importance of clean drinking water and the other one is about body constitution of men and women in Chinese medicine.

The first newspaper clip talks about India’s giant Tata group has launched a new water purifier, the Tata Swach.Since there is[WAS] not enough clean water in India and the equipment[S] are[WERE] lagged behind, the poor usually get ill because of drinking dirty water.Now, the new water purifier can filter harmful particles and bacteria to provide clean drinking water for the poor.Therefore, the poor have access to safe drinking water in order to prevent [THEMSELVES FROM](It's just the way I would put it to make it clear) diseases.

The second newspaper clip is talking about herbalists found that Hong Kong men are hot-tempered and women are forgetful.Actually,health are[IS] divided into nine ‘body constitutions’ in Chinese medicine. Hot-tampered[HOT-TEMPERED] men are in damp-heat type(濕熱) and forgetful women are in qi-deficient type(氣虛).Both sexes always felt[FEEL] drowsy and cannot sleep well since they do not have enough exercise and balanced lifestyle.

Very well-written. My revising was almost unnecessary.

2010-02-22 23:29:55 補充：
Or for the word "all" in the first paragraph, you can replace it with "both".

2010-02-22 23:35:55 補充：
Second paragraph
the poor usually get[GOT] ill because of drinking dirty water.

Last paragraph
Hot-tampered[HOT-TEMPERED] men are in damp-heat type(濕熱) and forgetful women are in qi-deficient type(氣虛). [I think both in's can be omitted]

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