中一面試~自我介紹(翻譯)

winnie24400152：
1) 我首先要提醒你因為是面試,你未曾認識面試老師所以不應一見面就說熟落的話如 Hello,或在社交場合對第一次被笫三者介紹相識時的 How do you do?最好說 Good morning sir.或Good afternoon sir.如對方是女士就用 madam代替 sir 來開始.
2) 你的全文結構及內容相當好, 除了說其他科目要(死背), 但數學就只需(背熟)就得, 是有矛盾之處。所以在這關節上要稍為運用語言技巧來表達,我且綜合你的原意譯出來讓你作為參考如下：

Good afternoon sir, my name is ( 全名較好). I am twelve years old and I am
studying primary 6(不必說c) in (學校名). I live in Chi Lok Fa Yuen of Tuen Mun with my parents and my elder brother. My favourite sport is badinton
because it can help strengthen my physique(體力讀fe-食) as well my as my health(健康 (如嫌 as well as 難記可用 and代替)。
My best subject is mathematics because, unlike other subjects, I need only to remember all the necessary formulae(方程式的眾數,讀formiu-ley )to tackle(應付,觧决) most problems I may encounter(可能遭遇到的)in the subject.
I may be careless sometimes, but( but 之前一不可以用although,所以我不用它怕你到時說錯文法就大打折扣了) I am an optimistic young man with good
confidence in myself. I therefore truly believe that I am suitable to study in
your school (或college) if I be lucky enough to be admitted.(若幸運被錄取的話)
我已用最淺白的詞句替你把文中意思譯過來。我亦提議你大可將作好了的說話(不一定是我上述譯的)抄出來背到滚瓜爛熟,會對你有好處,但你念背之前要肯定句語文法冇錯及每字發音正確。祝你好運 !

Hi! I 'm! xxx, 12 lunar new year, this year) the administrators ' reading list (University of 6 c class names). I live in Tuen Mun Chi Lok Garden, I have 4 people, including my father, Mama, brother and me. My interest is to play badminton, because badminton sport in a night in 煉 can be 鍛, and wholesome. I was absent from his defense of the great subject is mathematics, because according to the Division of the Department do not have to like the range of other subjects parroting, as long as you learn formula, very easy. Although I have a good general idea, but Ocarina of time I copy of great musical and cultural), and to contribute to confidence, so I considered that I may not serve axisymnetric in ebastine (album) school!

Hi! I'm xxx, 12-year-old this year, schools (school name) of the 6 c class. I live in Tuen Mun Chi Lok Fa Yuen, I have four people, including my father, mother, brother and me. My interest is to play badminton, because badminton will build in a healthy body and healthy. My best subject is mathematics, because according to the Division of the Department do not have to like the range of other subjects parroting, as long as you learn formula, very easy. Sometimes a good general idea, but, my copy of great optimism, and confidence, so I think I can fit into the ebastine schools!