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Halloween Horror is a story in an American town. The author is Gina D.B. Clemen. The publisher is Black Cat.

This book has a exciting and terrifying plot. It talked about Kelly and Megan, two sisiter, who and their friend(s) wanted to find a place to have a Halloween party. They found an abandoned house, then terrifying things happended in that house.

It is a book over 500 words that I ever read. It is really exciting and I am glad I have the chance to finish it.

另外應該是「第」字，唔係「笫」字。總體而言，只會提你寫讀書報告時講述書的內容請用past tense.其他部份請請示老師指示，現用present tense。

其實還可以在第二段講一下故事內容，並且在第三段寫下讀後感。

Halloween Horror is a novel written by Gina D. B. Clemen and published by the Black Cat. Its setting is an American Town. This book is about the encounter of two sisters, Kelly and Magan, in this American Town and has an exciting and horrible plot. These two sisters and their friends found an abandoned house in the town for their Halloween party but had terrible experience therein. I enjoy reading this book as it is very interesting. In fact, it is my first time finish reading an English novel of more than 500 words!


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Halloween Horror is a story that happened in a small American town. The author is Gina D.B.Clemen. The publisher is Black Cat.

This book rocks with an exciting plot filled with terrifying depictions, in which Kelly and Megan, the two sisters, were finding a place to hold a Halloween party with their friends. They found an abandoned house for the party, and horrible things kept happening in the house. It is so exciting!

This is a very nice book. And I am so glad that this is my first time finish reading a book with over 500 words!

Halloween Horror is an American town story. The author is Gina D.B.Clemen.The publishing is black cat. This book has a exciting and terrible plot. Halloween Horror talk about Kelly and Megan are two sister .They and their friend find a place to have the Halloween party.They find the abandoned house to have the party. Then,they happen a terrible thing at abandoned house. I finished this book. I felt glad. I was from more than 500 words in English.This book really Nice.

Halloween Horror is an American town story. The author is Gina D.B.Clemen.The publishing is black cat. This book has a exciting and terrible plot. Halloween Horror talk about Kelly and Megan are two sister .They and their friend find a place to have the Halloween party.They find the abandoned house to have the party. Then,they happen a terrible thing at abandoned house. I finished this book. I felt glad. It was the first time that I read a English book more than five hundred words. ( 我是笫一次看超過五百字的英文書) This book is really good 好看.

我是笫一次看超過五百字的英文書
It is my first time to read the English books which over five hundred words .
好看
This book really interesting .