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I am writing to express my interest in the post of XXX Clerk, advertised in your company website, dated xx th January, 2010.

I have graduated from XXX college, major in XXX. Besides, I have acquired pass with credit in LCCI Higher and Intermediate level of accounting examination.

After graduated, I have worked in a ABC company as an accounts clerk for 1.5 years. I am responsible for handling full set accounting jobs, including accounts receivable and payable, cash flow, bank reconciliation and prepare monthly end report. Apart from accounting duties, I also had taken part in various categories in the company, such as, stock market, money lending, car parks operation, property management.

I would be grateful if I have an interview opportunity to explain my application with you. Enclosed please find a resume giving you details of my personal particulars. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.