想知e句岩唔岩.....

2010-02-16 3:22 am
It is difficult.As far as that goes,Peter does far from being understand it.
(同埋如果係會考用到咁既句子...會唔會錯=-=''??)thz~!

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2010-02-17 8:29 am
✔ 最佳答案
錯唔晒,但後面可以直接d。
It is difficult.As far as that goes,Peter does not understand it.

一句簡單既句子太過雕琢,其實有時會有反效果。

會考最緊要精而簡,唔係話用d懶靚既句子就一定高分,但就算用都要用得岩位。好似你呢句咁,其實直接想講「peter 唔明果樣野因為佢太難」。一句簡單
It is difficult , so peter does not understand it .
Peter does not understand it because of the difficulty.......etc.

最好既作文表達係簡單既短句就盡量一針見血,長少少既句子先砌靚佢
如果連表達一句簡單既句子「peter 唔明果樣野因為佢太難」都要用到"It is difficult.As far as that goes,Peter does not understand it."呢d用左都唔知岩唔岩既句子,咁後面接住既長句又要雕花咁,成篇野就會變得冗長。

但如果短句雕琢講究,但長句普普通通,呢d叫有頭威冇尾陣。

真正寫文寫得靚既係意思簡單既短句一針見血,直接表達,到長句就用唔同sentence patterns + 靚字砌出黎,又大方又順眼。要分優劣睇你長句表達就高下立見。

所以我勸你,會考都係穩打穩紮好d,呢d句子留番日後寫其他文先慢慢show,唔好係考試到博。
2010-02-16 6:08 am
這句錯得離譜!文法錯和有少少辭不達意.我看完都不明.如你用 這句去考會考,死定.


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