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2010-02-13 7:02 am
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Because you are mature,i told you i do not mind that person is rich or poor,if i can with him,my heart will be rich!!

i am also a woman,i like beautiful things,is someone gave me,i really happy,but i will nit insist that meterial,because i think anything would be bad either or lose,but in my knowledage of the brain.

Although i am not a clever girl,but i was hard-working girl and then i was young but i am not a child,for me,the futre is important,so i hope i can learn more!!

In you,i can learn more things,at the same time makes me feel with you will be safe. It just what i wanted.
更新1:

第二段有野打錯..係''If someone gave me...."

更新2:

sorry....我打重新打過第二段* i am also a woman,i like beautiful things,if someone gave me,i really happy,but i will not insist that meterial,because i think anything would be bad either or lose,but in my knowledage of the brain will be not.

回答 (3)

2010-02-13 9:34 am
You are a mature person, I tell you that I do not mind if that person is rich or poor. If I can be with him, then my heart will be enriched!

I am a woman and I like the beautiful things. If someone gave me, I would be happy, but I would not insist on the pursuit of material comforts. I think that all things may also be corrupted or missing, but the knowledge stored in my brain will never disappear.

I am not a clever girl, but I am working hard. Even though I was a little girl, but I am not a child. For me, the future is important; I hope to be able to find out more!

I can learn many things from you, at the same time, you make me feel that with you will have a safe feeling, and this is what I want.
2010-02-13 9:11 am
Because you are mature; I have told you I don&#039;t mind whether you are rich or poor, if i can be with you, my heart with be rich!

I am a woman who likes beautiful things, if someone gives me something beautiful, I am very happy, but I don&#039;t mind if you don&#039;t give me something, because materialistic objects are not the most important thing.

Although I can&#039;t be defined as a clever girl, I am hard working, and I used to be young, but I am not a child anymore. The future to me is very important, and I hope I can learn more!

With you, I can learn more, and at the same time I feel I will be safe wih you. It&#039;s just what I always wanted.
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