Grammar

I think grammatically you are correct but I would say:

I hope to further my study on in-depth regional issues about globalization and regionalization.

您好，我推薦您一個非常不錯的英語學習網站，里面有很多非常不錯的學習資源，您能從中得到不少幫助：



http://www.hkenglishstudy.info



祝您好運!

I hope to study in-depth regional issues about globalization and regionalization.