英文變中文,文化上有無錯!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

你這封離職信有些錯誤，我加些私人意見改動，你看看可否這樣：


Dear Ann，
I regret to inform you that I have decided to resign from my present position,office assistant, with effective from7 march 2010.Thank you for giving me a chance to work in ABC Education where I learn and gain valuable experience.
I hope my resignation would not cause you much inconvenience. I would be much grateful if you could let me have a reference letter before my leaving. Thank you for your kind attention.

Yours sincerely,
Chan Man Man

註：不要用 faithfully, 它是在不知受函者的姓名的情況下才用。全篇譯：

親愛的Ann：
我抱歉要報告給你知道，我已決定從我現時的崗位(辦公室助理)辭職，由今年三月七日起生效。多謝你給我機會在ABC教育工作，在此我學習及得到寶貴的經驗。
我希望我的辭職不會為你帶來太多不便。如你能在我離開之前，讓我得到離職證明書，我會十分感激，謝謝你的關注。


2010-02-08 17:28:15 補充：
Thank you for giving me a chance to work in ABC Education where I learn and gain valuable experience這句改回：
Thank you for giving me chances to learn and gain valuable experience in ABC Education.會好些。

Dear Ann
I regret to inform you that I decided to resign my present position office assistant with effect from7 march 2010.Thank you for giving me a chance to learn and gain the valuable experience in ABC Education
I hope my resignation would not cause you much inconvenience. Thank you for your kind attention and would appreciate if you could let me have a reference letter before leave.
Yours sincerely ,
Chan Man Man

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http://www.hkenglishstudy.info



祝您好運!

你的英文辭職信措詞雖畧有瘢疵及兩三個錯字,但整體結構尚算不錯,可惜我不明你ABC Education 的意思,否則我教你如何把它譯為中文易如反掌。我幫不上忙覺得非常抱歉。