以下有10個句子,
我想請英文高手們幫我檢查看看,
文法正不正確或者是流暢度 !
1.Finish your homework first.
2.Do housework every day.
3.Wake up at 9:00,and never oversleep.
4.Exercise 30 minutes each day.
5.Get to bed at 22:30.
6.Walk Aunt's dog twice a week.
7.Always show filial obedience for parents.
8.Laugh at least 5 times a day.
9.Be polite and be happy all the time.
10Wish yourself would be safe and be satisfied in this vacation.
請英文高手們幫幫忙
謝謝 : D
英文句子文法正不正確(急20點)
2010-02-06 7:57 am
回答 (3)
2010-02-06 8:54 am
✔ 最佳答案
7. Always show filial obedience to parents.10.Wish yourself would be safe and be
satisfied in this vacation.
>>> Wish you to be safe and satisfied in this vacation.
2010-02-06 00:55:54 補充：
版大的句子流暢，僅就文法部份提供個人淺見供您參考：
7. Always show filial obedience to parents.
10.Wish yourself would be safe and be satisfied in this vacation.
>>> Wish you to be safe and satisfied in this vacation.
Sorry for posting error!
2010-02-06 10:53 am
這是要叮嚀小朋友的嗎?
1-9 都是用祈使句 文法還算好 10得寫完整一點
另外 有些用字可以改得比較像跟小朋友說話
例如
1. Finish your homework before you play.
3. Get up at 9:00, and don't sleep in.
5. Get in bed by 22:30.
7. Always listen to your parents.
10. Make sure you (yourself) have a safe and satisfying vacation.
或 Be safe and have fun on this vacation.
或 I wish you a safe and satisfying vacation.
1-9 都是用祈使句 文法還算好 10得寫完整一點
另外 有些用字可以改得比較像跟小朋友說話
例如
1. Finish your homework before you play.
3. Get up at 9:00, and don't sleep in.
5. Get in bed by 22:30.
7. Always listen to your parents.
10. Make sure you (yourself) have a safe and satisfying vacation.
或 Be safe and have fun on this vacation.
或 I wish you a safe and satisfying vacation.
2010-02-06 8:36 am
1~9都合文法, 第十句錯得離譜.
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