英文自我介紹

My name is XXX. I am XXX years old now, and am studying in XXX school currently. My family members include my parents and a sister. Our relationship is very good.
I am good at drawing because that sparks my interest, and I practice it on a regular basis. I got many awards in the drawing competitions. My favorite subject is Math because it is very interesting. Sometimes I can get a full score in the Math exam. My favorite sport is running because it can make me healthier. I also had earned some awards in the running competitions too. My ideal job in the future is to be a fireman as it is a very meaningful and exciting job. I really wish that I can achieve my goal someday.

My name is XXX. I am XXX years old . I am studying in XXX school. I live with
my parents and a sister. Our relationship is very good.
I am good at drawing. It's because I am interested on that and I always
practice it by myself. I also got many awards in drawing competitions before.
My favorite subject is Maths. It is very interesting. Sometimes I can get full
marks in Maths exams .
My favorite sport is running.It's because running can make me healthier.
I also got some awards in some running competitions.
I want to be a fireman when I grow up because It is very meaningful and
exciting . I hope I can acheive it so I need to study hard.



^.^ Well done!

I am good at drawing. It’s because I am interested... ---cross out the ''it's'' because it's unecessary. Just put ''i am good at drawing because....''

I also got many award in drawing competitions. ---u miss a ''s'' after ''award'' it should be ''awards''

My favorite sport is running. It’s because running can make me healthier. ---again, just put'' my favorite sport is running because it can...'' *u don't have to say ''running'' for twice.

I have also got some award in some running competitions. ---make it easy..u can say either '' I have also gotten some awards in running competitions.'' or '' I have also gotten awards in some running competitions.'' Besides, i think the word ''race'' is better for talking about running competition...but yours are fine..u can keep it like this. You can say running competition. It's ok.

Your self-introduction is good. It is nice and simple. Remember simple always better. Good job!! Keep it up!! =]

2010-02-01 07:49:37 補充：
I don't know y there are so many &#039...i think you may find it difficult to read..so i put the whole thing(ur self-introduction) down here.

2010-02-01 07:50:58 補充：
My name is XXX. I am XXX years old now. I am studying in XXX school. I have a
mother, father and a sister. Our relationship is very good.
I am good at drawing because I am interested on that and I always
practice it myself. I also got many awards in drawing competitions.

2010-02-01 07:51:40 補充：
My favorite subject is Math. It is very interesting. Sometimes I can get full marks in a Math exam too.
My favorite sport is running because it can make me healthy. I
have also gotten some awards in running competitions.(or gotten awards in some running competition)

2010-02-01 07:52:19 補充：
I want to be a fireman when I grow up. It is a very meaningful and exciting job. I
hope I can do that.

**I don't want to change (content)too much because that's from you. It's your idea so i just keep ur content and changed ur grammar. I didn't add stuffs. Keep it original.Your own version~right? =]

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My name is XXX. I am XXX years old . I am studying in XXX school. I have a
mother, father and a sister. We get on well.
I am good at drawing because I am interested on it .I always practice it for a long time a day. I got many award in many drawing competitions.
My favorite subject is Maths. It is an interesting subject. Sometimes I can get full marks in Maths too.
My favorite sport is running because running can make me healthily. I won a lot of awards too.
I think being fireman is a meaningful and exciting job.I hope i can be a fireman when i grow up

My name is XXX. I am XXX years old now. I am studying in XXX school. I live with my mother, father and a sister. Our relationship is very good.
I am good at drawing. It’s because I am interested at that and I always
practice it myself. I also got many award in drawing competitions.
My favorite subject is Math. It is very interesting. Sometimes I can get full marks in a Math exam too.
My favorite sport is running. It because running can make me healthy. I
have also got some award in some running competitions.
I want to be a fireman when I grow up. It is a very meaningful and exciting job. I
hope I can doit.