Good afternoon, Mrs Hou and fellow students. I think many of youlike to watch film. Do you already watch 2012? In today presentation, I wouldlike to introduce you all the film 2012 and my favorite character in this film.I hope you all would fancy it.
This film is a disaster film. It talk about that in 2012, the earth’scrust displacement begins. As millions die in the earthquake and tsunami. Also,all scientists know that human can’t stop this disaster. But the government ofall nation also produce a naval vessel to resist the disaster. Jackson who isthe main character knows the location of the naval vessel, so he tried torescue his kids, his ex-wife and her new husband and get them to Yellowstonebefore LA falls into the ocean. It is a short introduction of this film.
Now, I’m going to talk about my favorite character in this film who iscalled Jackson. I opine that he is a brave man. It’s because when he alreadyknow the earthquake will begin, he also lend a plane to rescue his family. Inspite of the fact that all people want to give up, he also try his best to findthe way for life.
Andthat is not all. He reminded us that we should be spending more time with ourfamily then working on our businesses or works. This mistake is being shown inthe movie. Jackson is a young author and father of two kids. But his wife alsoleft him. It’s because he was a workaholic. Nevertheless, at last he understoodwhat was really important is his family. Therefore, he dropped everything tosave his wife and kids. In the world, money is not the most important things inour life. Please don’t forgot our family.
我sba要短講, 有無人可以入黎幫我改一改份講稿!thx!
2010-01-29 6:18 am
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2010-01-30 1:55 am
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Good afternoon, Mrs Hou and fellow students. I think many of you like watching film. Have you seen the movie “2012”? Today I would like to talk about this movie and my favorite character. I hope you would like it.This is a disaster film, talking about the displacement of Earth’s crust starting in 2012. Millions died in earthquake and tsunami. All scientists realized that human couldn’t stop the disasters. The governments of all countries jointly constructed a naval vessel which could be used to escape from the disaster. Jackson, who is the main character of the movie, knew the location where the naval vessel settled. He tried to rescue his kids, ex-wife together with her husband, to get them to Yellowstone National Park before LA falls into the ocean.
Now, I’m going to talk about my favorite character - Jackson. I think that he is a brave man. Although he knew that there would be an earthquake, he still lent out a plane to rescue his family. Despite all people were giving up, he tried his best to find the solutions to survive.
Moreover, he reminded us that we should spend more time with our family instead of working. In the movie, Jackson was a young author and being the father of two kids. His wife left him just because he was a workaholic. At last he realized the importance of his family, and he abandoned everything to save them. In the real world, money is not the most important thing in life. Just don’t overlook our family.
Last but not least, I highly respect his toughness and uncompromising attitude. Although he could only publish 433 books, he didn’t give up and kept on writing. Jackson established a very good model for adolescence today, who tend to run away when they encounter problems in their life. In fact they should try their best to find the solutions. There is no problem that couldn't be solved.
2010-01-29 17:56:28 補充：
All in all, I think we should learn from Jackson, no matter his personality or attitude towards life. I highly recommend this film to you, and I hope you love my presentation. Thank you.
2010-01-29 17:57:37 補充：
I didnt watch this movie yet but i'm sure i'll watch once the DVD launched :)
參考: hkslot
2010-01-29 8:44 am
Overall, quite good in presenting your thoughts. You even used some spoken phrases to make it alive. Just to point of a few specific improvements to better:
Do you already watch 2012?-> Have you seen the film 2012?
- Even though we say we watch the movie (only mean you're in the theatre watching), but you use "see" when asking others or say "I've seen 2012, have you?" Read more books and watch for the verb (see, look, watch, view, observe, etc.) and the things they describe and the situation they occur.
This film is a disaster film.->This film is about disasters.
- A disastous film means the file is extremely bad, nobody want to see it.
In the world, -> In this world,
- It is not wrong, but since you're saying to the audience "you", and they live in "this" world (here), not in the world (out there). You may use in the world if you're talking about something objectively..e.g. 20% of the people of the world is consuming 80% of the energy (of the world).
Please don't forgot our family.-> Please don't forget our family.
- do not "present tense" (I'm sure this is a careless mistake)
In this world, no problems we can not solve.-> There is no problems we cannot solve in the world.
- see above about "the world", here you're talking about an objective statement, so I suggest you write as one sentence to make a stronger statement without breaking as you turn from "they" to "we" - this is good way of making a speech.
- cannot is one word, no exception. You should speak this "cannot" slowly and slightly louder to make a stronger impression.
No matter his personality our attitude.-> ??
- this is the only sentence I've no idea what you're saying.
- what is the relation betwen "his personality"他的性格and "our attitude"我們的態度?
2010-01-29 00:46:05 補充：
Anyway, I highly recommend this film to you and I hope you all will love my presentation. -> Finally, I highly recommend.... and I hope you all like my presentation.
2010-01-29 00:46:22 補充：
- "Anyway" means forget about what you've heard, bad ending. Use "Finally" at the end of a speech is almost always correct and remind yourself to follow by a conclusion (an important statement).
2010-01-29 00:46:41 補充：
- "will love" is future tense. You want the audience to enjoy your talk now and always, not later; and "love" is a very strong emotion, only use it for your boy/girl friend, "like" is good enough. or your may use "enjoy".
2010-01-29 00:47:26 補充：
I enjoy it. A rare good English writing (question) posted on this web.
Do you already watch 2012?-> Have you seen the film 2012?
- Even though we say we watch the movie (only mean you're in the theatre watching), but you use "see" when asking others or say "I've seen 2012, have you?" Read more books and watch for the verb (see, look, watch, view, observe, etc.) and the things they describe and the situation they occur.
This film is a disaster film.->This film is about disasters.
- A disastous film means the file is extremely bad, nobody want to see it.
In the world, -> In this world,
- It is not wrong, but since you're saying to the audience "you", and they live in "this" world (here), not in the world (out there). You may use in the world if you're talking about something objectively..e.g. 20% of the people of the world is consuming 80% of the energy (of the world).
Please don't forgot our family.-> Please don't forget our family.
- do not "present tense" (I'm sure this is a careless mistake)
In this world, no problems we can not solve.-> There is no problems we cannot solve in the world.
- see above about "the world", here you're talking about an objective statement, so I suggest you write as one sentence to make a stronger statement without breaking as you turn from "they" to "we" - this is good way of making a speech.
- cannot is one word, no exception. You should speak this "cannot" slowly and slightly louder to make a stronger impression.
No matter his personality our attitude.-> ??
- this is the only sentence I've no idea what you're saying.
- what is the relation betwen "his personality"他的性格and "our attitude"我們的態度?
2010-01-29 00:46:05 補充：
Anyway, I highly recommend this film to you and I hope you all will love my presentation. -> Finally, I highly recommend.... and I hope you all like my presentation.
2010-01-29 00:46:22 補充：
- "Anyway" means forget about what you've heard, bad ending. Use "Finally" at the end of a speech is almost always correct and remind yourself to follow by a conclusion (an important statement).
2010-01-29 00:46:41 補充：
- "will love" is future tense. You want the audience to enjoy your talk now and always, not later; and "love" is a very strong emotion, only use it for your boy/girl friend, "like" is good enough. or your may use "enjoy".
2010-01-29 00:47:26 補充：
I enjoy it. A rare good English writing (question) posted on this web.
2010-01-29 8:24 am
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