幫我寫一篇小學5年級的運動會的英文作文

Today is sport day,I'm very excited.I'm wait for that for a long time.
I bring many snack,most of them are chips.I take part of the runing races,it start at ten o'clock in the morning.After a while,i see my electrical watch and it's time to the races.I feel very nervous.My classmates are cheering to me,that's make me more nervous.A sound peep we all started to run,We use our whole power to the finish line.Finally I win the competition.
At last I've get a gold medal.I think my sport teacher will proud to me.

我沒心情寫,給意見你吧!
1.決定用咩tense寫
(多數用past)

2.organized 文章內容
(時間,人物,地點,事情,心情)

3.檢查文章
(有冇錯字)

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比D參考詞語你:
Sports games,sport competition/ 運動會 (好似系)
happy/快樂 nervous/緊張不安
First/首先 Then/接著 Next/之後
Finally/最後 run/跑 long jump/跳遠
hour/小時 teacher/老師

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