edit a sentence for 10 points?

Consequently the author can capture the reader's interest through the use of various literary devices, allowing the novel's message to be conveyed easily.

Consequently, with help from other devices, the message of the novels is made instantly obvious to readers, and their interest is sparked.

With the help from other devices, readers can comprehend the message of the novels immediately and be appealed quickly. ^_^

With the help of other devices, readers can understand the message of the novels right away and be interested.

while specializing in minor adjustments isn't a pivotal factor of branch, and we supply help for another, there will be no bickering over trivia. we are able to comprehend that there never have been any adjustments, and we are able to work out a rustic united as one.

(I assume that 'consequently' is a lead-in from the previous sentence.)

As the result of this, and with help from other devices, readers can easily discern the message of the novels (or novel?) and decide if they are interested.

Therefore, with the help from other devices,readers can get the message of the novels instantly, and become interested.

As a result, with the help of other literary devices, readers can comprehend the message of the novels immediately and become interested.

It's OK as is, but...

Wanna be fancy huh?
Try this:
As a result, readers can get the message of the novels immediately, with the help from other devices, to perk their interest. (so's ya kin suck 'em in ta buy yer book).
;-)

with the help of other devices, consequently , readers can get the message of the novels right away and be interested. haa im not sure! x