About an essay

2010-01-20 6:29 am
I am going to write an essay about the following topic.

The rapid economic growth of China has been more of a threat than an opportunity to traditional Chinese culture.

Which websites are useful for the essay? (Support details)

What is the main idea and introduction of the essay?

What is the conclusion of the essay?

Many Thanks!!!

回答 (2)

2010-01-21 1:53 am
✔ 最佳答案
Rex's ans. have nice idea. But if you want to write a good essay, you should do more than that.
First of all, you should define traditional Chinese culture.e.g.chinese lifestyle, economics
form, food, etc.
Then you body part is using your idea to fulfill what you define.It called linkage. For example low price level link to the living style, you can said as people have more and more purchasing power, thus they may but more good from other countries since a rapid economic growth enhance globalisation. Therefore chinese people may lose their tradition identity.
Afterward you should do the comparative analysis, it mean which point is the most important or less important. For example, I think close to other country is the most important point since it affect chinese trandition value of chinese while low labour cost only have influence in the living standard.
When you make conclusion, you may said your all about point , such as..... and ....is the most important, these point violent what you just define, thus, it is a threat to traditional Chinese culture rather than opportunity.
P.S never just write the point which benefit your view, you must also write the point you dissagree and explain why you have difference view.
Also, write your most important point first.
And remember to write topic sen.
Besides use more connentive word, e.g in the other hand, all in all, futher more,etc....
Last but not least, Wikipedia and BBC News and History may help you.
Using this skill and using Rex's idea, you can write a perfect essay.
Good luck, I am apologetic for my poor english.
參考: own idea
2010-01-20 11:06 pm
Intro
Since the China entry to WTO. China become the biggest country for supply export in the world.

body
Since 90's change, after the war the china become close door to the world trade business. however, after 90's the china had final open their trade business for pull the economic growth. also to export student to overseas to learn skill and bring it back to China for improve the country's education and skill.

Since 2000's change, since China become the highest population. therefore, China is the highest labour power in the world and the labour cost is low, by the price level and currency is low than everywhere in the world


1. labour power
2. a lot of land
3. expand cosl low
4. close to every Asia countries
5. low currency
6. low price level
7. low salary cost
8. long work hour



Conclusion

China is one of the fastest grow country in the world. because it high labour but low salary wants. etc
參考: book call ”red dragon grow China”


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