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Rex's ans. have nice idea. But if you want to write a good essay, you should do more than that.
First of all, you should define traditional Chinese culture.e.g.chinese lifestyle, economics
form, food, etc.
Then you body part is using your idea to fulfill what you define.It called linkage. For example low price level link to the living style, you can said as people have more and more purchasing power, thus they may but more good from other countries since a rapid economic growth enhance globalisation. Therefore chinese people may lose their tradition identity.
Afterward you should do the comparative analysis, it mean which point is the most important or less important. For example, I think close to other country is the most important point since it affect chinese trandition value of chinese while low labour cost only have influence in the living standard.
When you make conclusion, you may said your all about point , such as..... and ....is the most important, these point violent what you just define, thus, it is a threat to traditional Chinese culture rather than opportunity.
P.S never just write the point which benefit your view, you must also write the point you dissagree and explain why you have difference view.
Also, write your most important point first.
And remember to write topic sen.
Besides use more connentive word, e.g in the other hand, all in all, futher more,etc....
Last but not least, Wikipedia and BBC News and History may help you.
Using this skill and using Rex's idea, you can write a perfect essay.
Good luck, I am apologetic for my poor english.