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2010-01-16 11:42 pm

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good morning , today i would talk about a comic- snoopy. the creator is charlies M . sChulz.
snoopy born in daisy hill puppy farm. he has eight brothers and sisters . his friend woodstock is a queer bird .
only snoopy can understand his language. snoopy always daydream on his doghouse roof.
[ Snoopy loves root beer and pizza . he hates coconut candy .
Two things Snoopy dislikes are listening to balloons being squeezed and cats.
Snoopy has the uncanny ability to play fetch with soap bubbles,
and can hear someone eating marshmallows or cookies at a distance, or even peeling a banana.
snoopy and his friends always make joke ! ]

snoopy is my favourite snoopy . i have read it when i was small.
snoopy keep me company to glow . snoopy story is very funny and entertaining .
It has a big charm .I like it so much .
sometime , i recommed the book to my friends and it is fit to all of ages !

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2010-01-16 11:57 pm

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Good morning,today i would like to talk about a comic story call Snoopy.The author of this book is M . sChulz.The story is talking about Snoopy was born in daisy hill puppy farm. He had eight brothers and sisters .His friend woodstock is a queer bird .
Only snoopy could understand his language. snoopy always daydreams on his doghouse roof.

2010-01-16 16:02:59 補充：
My favourite chacter is Snoopy.i had read this book when i was very small.

2010-01-16 16:03:03 補充：
This book with me togeher grow up.I think this book is very funny and entertaining .
It has a big charm .I love it so much .
sometimes , i recommed this book to my friends and it is a good book of all of the age people to read.

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