1.Regarding the number of people atending ,It is 1250.
2.For the date of open day,It is 4Dec 07
3.The time of open day is from 9.30 to 5.30 pm
4I also have some following requirement .As for the refreshments,I prefer to ready at
9am If possible,the time can not exceed 9.30am.
5.Please note that the refreshments respectively are coffee ,tea and sandwiches.
6 The tissue must ready for guests
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2010-01-05 4:29 am
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2010-01-05 5:36 am
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1. Attendents are expected to be 1250.2. The Open Day is on 4 Dec 07.
3. The opening hours are from 9:30am to 5:30 pm.
4. I would like the refreshments to arrive at 9:00am and no later than 9:30am.
5. The refreshments include coffee, tea and sandwiches.
6. And need to prepare tissues for the guests.
You've too many obsolete words and sentence structure of writing from the 1920s. If you are writing in point form, a lot of decorative words and phrases can be omitted.
2010-01-05 9:26 am
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