請英文高手幫我修正

As an English learner, I think these five parts(聽說讀寫 單字) are extremely important! Because these five parts connected with each other.
因為because的用法，通常是A，because B.這樣的句型。
如：I didnt go to school because I was sick yesterday.

如果你要說因為......，你可以在前面加It is，word應該就不會有綠線了!
建議改成：It is because these five parts are connected with each other.

I hope I can use these ways at least one hour a day to make myself have a better environment of learning English.
請問你這句話前面還有嗎?如果沒有的話，句意會不清楚喔，因為我沒有看到哪些方法。如果你前面有說那些方法或步驟的話，我會建議改成：I hope I can have a better English-learning environment by following these steps at least an hour a day.

我建議的地方有用粗體跟底線畫出來，給你參考嚕!
希望對你有所幫助!

(聽說讀寫 單字)
Listen, speak, read, write, vocabulary.

改成這樣~
As an English learner, I think these five parts(聽說讀寫 單字) are extremely

important because these five parts are connected with each other.

I hope I can practice these parts at least one hour a day to make myself

have a better way of learning English.

那一句會出現文法錯誤是因為because是連接詞，連接兩個句子，

但你的Because只有連接一個句子，

就是these five parts connected with each other，

因此你把他跟前面的句子合起來才會完整，這樣就不會出現文法錯誤了。

我把use改成practice因為使用是"使用東西"或"使用方法"，

那五個parts並不是方法，因此建議改成"練習"比較正確。

因為句型改了，因此connected前加are，表示他們是連結在一起的。

最後我把environment改成way，你的句型在這裡就比較適合用way了，

因為那是"學習英文比較好的方法"，環境這個字通常是用"創造一個比較好的環境" 。

所以如果你是寫 I hope I can create a better environment for improving my

English learning, so I stipulate with myself that I will practice these five parts

at least one hour a day.

那就可以用environment了~

2010-01-05 20:10:32 補充：
OK的啦~多一點意見多一點參考~重點是有學習到嘛~