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2010-01-02 10:03 pm
幫我check下有冇錯丫,THZ>_<~

In 2009, I had lots of things need to improve as I have not done enough exercise, afraid for speak English and ate lots of junk food. Sometimes, I had a little quarrel with my friends. I think I was detestable! So, I must improve my English and behave myself.
In 2010, my new year’s resolutions are keep fit, save money and improve my English. First, I will do exercise (ride bicycle, run or jump the rope) at least 15 minutes every weekend. I want to grow taller! Second, I will save $50 every month because we should put money aside for a rainy day. Third, I will speak more English. I will speak English when I talk with my friends. I will listen more English song too.
I hope I can finish my target and have a happy new year.

回答 (3)

2010-01-03 12:35 am
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冇乜邊句啱,所以幫你寫過好過,自己留意點寫。

In 2009, I think I have a lot of shortcomings, such as not having enough exercise, being afraid of speaking English, and eating a lot of junk food. I also had some quarrels with my friends, which I felt bad about it.

In 2010, my new year resolutions are to keep fit, save money and improve my English. First, I will exercise for at least 30 minutes every weekend by riding a bicycle, running or jumping rope). I hope this will help me grow taller. Second, I have decided to save $50 every month to prepare for the rainy days. Third, I will practice English with my friends and listen to English songs to improve my verbal and comprehension skills.

I hope I can achieve these targets and have a successful and fufilling new year
2010-01-03 4:54 am
The suggestions below are for your reference only.

I must get rid of those improper habits I conducted in 2009 - eating too much junk food, doing less exercises, shying away from speaking English with others, sometimes making some quarrels with friends.

In 2010, I must strive for improving the above-mentioned habits - doing exercises at least 30 minutes per weekend(such as cycling, running and rope-jumping) for keeping fit and height growth, upgrading my English skills through more practices in reading, writing and listening, saving $50.00 per month for the future.

I hope that I would fulfill my target/commitments and have a happy new year .
2010-01-02 10:33 pm
In 2009, I had lots of things left to improve as I had not done enough exercise, such as still being afraid of speaking English and eating lots of junk food. Sometimes I also had little quarrel with my friends. I think I was detestable! So, I must improve my English and behave myself from now on.

In 2010, my new year's resolutions are keeping fit, saving money and improving my English. First, I will do exercise (riding bicycle, running or jumping the rope) at least 15 minutes every weekend because I want to grow taller. Second, I will save $50 every month because I think I should put money aside for a rainy day. Third, I will speak English as often as possible. I will speak English whenever I talk with my friends. I will listen to more English songs, too. I hope I can reach my target and have a happy new year.


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