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2009-12-28 10:08 pm
1. One evening, my friends, Susan, Cathy and I decided to hide inside the department store at mid-night (a missing word).

2. In the gallery, there were many marvellous paintings hanging on the wall. Would they be crazy? (I want to descirbe the painting as ghastly as ghost because the story is actually about a haunted department store at mid-night.)

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2009-12-28 11:03 pm
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1. One evening, my friends, Susan and Cathy, and I decided to hide inside the department store at mid-night (a missing word).

2. In the gallery, there were many marvellous paintings hanging on the wall. Would they be weird ? (I want to descirbe the painting as ghastly as ghost because the story is actually about a haunted department store at mid-night.)
2009-12-28 11:04 pm
In the gallery, there were many marvellous paintings hanged on the wall ???

Would they be crazy??
你個they指d paintings?
paintings會crazy???
Would that sound crazy???


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