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How was your weekend? Did you have a great time at the holiday camp? I went to a holiday camp last saturday too. Was it fun? I did rock climbing and went swimming. I wanted to go cycling but i was very tired so I had a rest. In tthe evening we had a barbecue. I ate chicken wings and sausages. I wanted to drink soft drinks but there weren't any. Are you free this weekend? Let's go out and have fun. I know you don't like ball games. I don't like ball games either. I don't like going to the cinema or going shopping. Do you have any ideas?

PS 你一定是在學and, or, but 和 either, or 了。因為我四年級的時候都是學這些。

2010-01-01 11:28:04 補充：
候選人005有點parallelism的錯誤:

I had rock climbing and went to swim
應改成
I had rock climbing and swimming

你用gerund就gerund, to infinitive就to infinitive, 不能一時一樣.

不過,我相信他/她只是不小心而已,不要對他/她不信任.

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How was your weekend? Did you have a great time at the holiday camp? I went to a holiday camp last Saturday. Was it fun? I had rock climbing and went to swim. I wanted to cycle but I was very tired so I had a rest instead. In the evening we had barbecue. I ate chicken wings and saussages. I wanted to drink a can ofsoft drink but there weren't any.
Are you free this weekend? Let's go out and have fun!
I know you don't like to play ball games, and so do I. I don't like going to the cinema but I like to go shopping! Did you have any ideas?

how was your weekend? did you have a great time at the holiday camp? i Went to a holiday camp last saturday either. it was fun? i did rock climbing or went swimming. i wanted to go cycling and i was very tired so i had a rest. inthe evening we had a barbecue. i ate chicken wings or sausages. i wanted to drink soft drinks and there weren't any. are you free this weekend? let's go out or have fun.
i know you don't like ball games. i don't like ball games too. i don't like going to the cinema but going shopping. do you have any ideas?

How was your weekend ?Did you have a great time at the holiday camp?I went to a holiday camp last saturday either.It was fun?I did rock climbing or went swimming.I wanted to go crying and i was very tired so we had a rest.In the evening we had a barbecue.I ate chicken wings or sausages. I wanted to drink soft drinks and there
were any. Are you free this weekend?Let's go out or have fun.I know you don't like ball games.I don't like playing ball games.I don't like playing ball games too.I don't like going to the cinema but i like going shopping.Do you have any ideas?

How was you weekend? Did you have a great time at the holiday camp? I went to a holiday camp last Saturday too. Was it fun? I did rock climbing and went swimming I wanted to cycling but I was very tired so I had a rest instead. In the evening we had barbecue. I ate chicken wings and saussages. I wanted to drink soft drinks but there weren't any.
Are you free this weekend? Let's go out and have fun!
I know you don't like to play ball games, and so do I. I don't like going to the cinema but I like to go shopping! Do you have any ideas?