My alarm clock did not ring ??

My alarm clock did not ring in the morning,
I wanted to wake up at nine o clock,
But instead, I woke up at half past ten,
I quickly wore my clothes and then took my bike and cycled hurriedly,
I reached school at a quarter to eleven,
Miss Chan used her fiendish eyes and stared at me, and said loudy:
Why are you late to class?
I didnt know what to say, and just kept silent,

Miss Chan looked at me for two minutes and said loudy again,
Go back to your seat

I quickly took my seat and focused reading

My alarm clock (had) not rung in the morning.
I wanted to wake up originally at nine o'clock, 我本想九點起床
But I awoke(got up) at half past ten (instead).
I quickly wore(put on) my clothes, then took my bicycle and rushed (towards school.)
我快速穿衣,和趕速踏單車
I reached my school at a quarter to eleven,
Miss Chan used her fiendish eyes staring at me, and said loudly, "Why are you getting late? "
I did not know what to (say)? I kept silent and could not utter a word.
我不知說什麼,所以沒出聲.
Miss Chan had glared at me (with dissatisfaction, exasperation) for two minutes and said loudly again, "Go back (to) your seat."
I took my seat quickly(promptly, immediately) and focused (on) reading (the textbook).
我坐上椅上和專心讀起書來

said loudly = > shouted, cried out, yelled......
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My alarm clock did not ring ??
My alarm clock did not ring in the morning,
I wanted to wake up at nine oclok,
But I woke at half past ten.
I rush to the toilet and changed my clothes then i took my bicycle and cycled to school
I reached my school at a quarter to eleven,
Miss Chan stared at me, and said loudy: why are you late?
I did not konw how to say? I kept silent,
Miss Chan looked at me for two minutes and said loudy again, Go back your seat,
i sat on my seat and focused reading
How horrible!

2009-12-22 19:22:37 補充：
i changed some