幫忙作一篇約200字的英文 The charity work

2009-12-20 5:05 am
請幫忙作一篇約200字的英文(小學五年級英文作文):

標題: The charity work I have done
作文提示:
* Have you done any charity work before ?
* What kind of charity work have you done ? (2 kinds)
* When did you last do the charity work ?
* How did you help ?
* How did you feel ?
* What do you think about doing good things to the others ?
更新1:

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回答 (3)

2009-12-21 6:03 am
呵呵...#2以每行18字計算,這文有10行,18*10=180呵呵,也是不夠

2009-12-20 22:16:23 補充:
comment for all composition.

#1 你想點?

#2 文法和article用得差,有兩個charity work不用加"a".生詞不太豐富,不是很多.
字數不夠
2009-12-21 6:00 am
yes,i&#039;ve done a charity work before.They are charity jumble sale and falg selling.In the jumble sale,i stood in the counter and tell people to buy the things.Also,i need to fix the price if some customer think that they&#039;re too expensive.During the flag selling day,i took a bag that use to store money and a 6 pages of paper that contain the flag.I walked around the road and ask the people if they want to buy it.
i fell very happy in the jumble sale as there are many people buy the things and i can help a lot of people.on the flag selling day,although it make me feel very tried after the activity,it feel great!Many people would like to buy a flag! i fell very excited when someone buy a flag!I love helping people as they are many people are very poor.I feel excellent about doing this good work.
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