absent-minded

2009-12-15 8:31 am
Life is changing from time to time,fate can't be predicated
Love & hatred are never ending.
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Who makes a good word at the end,pls?
(just a poem about my feeling)

回答 (2)

2009-12-15 8:17 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Suggest some revision for better poetry:

Life changes all the time,
Fate is not predicative,
Love & hatred never ends,
Mystery of Being.
2009-12-15 5:49 pm
you mean you want a single word?
Eternal ,is it ok?

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