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2009-12-12 2:43 am

From our hotel we can take bus t go to Wan Chain, when we arrive to Wan Chain then we will go to Banyan Garden to eat breakfast because it has different Chinese cuisines food and dim sum to eat, In there when we order the dim sum and different Chinese food, they made it so the food in there is fresh and yummy. We can from eat different Chinese cuisines food and dim sum to know more about Chinese culture.
After we eat the breakfast then we will walk to Golden Bauhinia Square, we can watch flag-raising ceremony and take photo. We go to Golden Bauhinia Square because the HK Convention and Exhibition Centre, an impressive architectural landmark, is the historic site of the return of Hong Kong to Chinese sovereignty on 30 June 1997. And when people finish go to Golden Bauhinia Square, we can go there to shopping, because near Golden Bauhinia Square have the local shopping centre.
In lunch time we will take the ferry go to LammaLsland then we will go to Rainbow Seafood Restaurant eat sea food because it has delicious and high quality seafood cuisine. The restaurant is an open culinary competition organized by the Hong Kong Tourism Board. The restaurant also offers diners a free shuttle ferry service. We can enjoy this service by making a reservation over the telephone and we can eat fresh sea food in there and having a relaxing day in there.
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Yogi

2009-12-12 5:05 am

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Let me simplify the criteria and just correct the wrong mistakes by replacing red words.

From our hotel we can take bus to go to Wan Chain, when we arrive to Wan Chain, we will go to Banyan Garden for breakfast because it has different Chinese cuisines food and dim sum to eat. In there we will order the dim sum and different Chinese food and the chefs there will make the food fresh and yummy. We can know more about Chinese culture by eating different Chinese cuisines food and dim sum.

After we eat the breakfast, we will walk to Golden Bauhinia Square, we can watch flag-raising ceremony and take photos. We must go to Golden Bauhinia Square because the HK Convention and Exhibition Centre, an impressive architectural landmark, is the historic site of the return of Hong Kong to Chinese sovereignty on 30 June 1997. After people go to Golden Bauhinia Square, we can go there for shopping, because there located some local shopping centres near Golden Bauhinia Square.

In lunch time we will take the ferry to go to Lamma Island. We will go to Rainbow Seafood Restaurant to eat seafood because it has delicious and high quality seafood cuisine. The restaurant is an open culinary competition organized by the Hong Kong Tourism Board. The restaurant also offers diners a free shuttle ferry service. We can enjoy this service by making a reservation over the telephone and we can eat fresh seafood there and having a relaxing day there.

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