請幫我check grammar (20分...緊急!!!)

請幫我改返岩對的grammar...我都知自己好多mistake...但請盡量幫我改...同埋如果我D字用錯左...請幫我修正返
同埋有幾個詞語我唔識得用英文表達...請幫我翻譯返英文
呢個係我的英文oral考試黎的...請幫幫我
thanks!!!

ps:因為呢個係用黎做drama...所以想對答方面都搞笑D...所以唔洗太正規都ok

D:are you sure you are always right? Do you remember who told me that tommy loves(其實我想講暗戀) me because he is so shy when facing me. i must be the active one 向他示愛.How about the result? He told me the reason why he was so shy when facing me is i look felonious, so he afraid to talk with me.
(呢個我係想講因為tommy對住我果時好怕醜...所以M以為佢鍾意我...但因為佢好怕醜...所以我一定係做主動示愛果個...但當我示完愛後...tommy話因為我太惡...所以佢係驚左同我講野)

M:It's just a misunderstand ok? please calm down.

D:Calm down? How i calm down? you always make me look like a clown! I
M:Shut up! please don't think that i am intentioned to make you do that ok? I just want you to find a boyfriend.

D:thank you very much. But is't no need you to help me worry about that?

M: you are my best friend. I am wrorry about you'll be the 老姑婆

D: a lot of boys want to date with me..include you boyfriend..so you should worry about youself first.

M:get out! 從此我地絕交