Please...help to check grammar

No offense but the paragraph was porrly written. I am just gonna correct the whole thing for ya. Though I will try my best to keep what you have right now.
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It is my pleasure to make your acquaintance (in the garden). what the hell are you trying to say? lol
It was not easy for the both of us to come across each other in boundless and indistinct sea of faces.
You mean the world to me; I will give you everything in your life.
Believe me, I am going to make you the happiest woman in the world.
It wasn't easy for the both of us to (be together if that's what you mean), let's cherish the love between us.
Oh, it's destiny. (Well it's kinda cheesy but whatever lol)

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grammar mistakes
each others = each other
meant to me= mean to me
the most happy= the happiest
the best life as I could = the best life I could
Is it really a poem?it's more like a vow, no poetic devices.
My version:
Fortunate to meet in the garden. a

For you and me, it’s not easy, b

Finding in the boundless sea (of people) b

You mean one and only to me, b

Provide you the best of me, b

I’ll make you the happiest woman, a

Believe me b

For you and me, it’s not easy , b

Cherish the love between you and me, b

Oh it’s destiny. brhymes:
one/only alliteration
me/easy/destiny (rhyme b)
woman/garden (rhyme a)

I think it's all correct =)