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用戶9881

2009-12-10 6:12 am

Because Macau is a tourism-based town, so I need this knowledge. I graduated, I would do first a tour guide to lead visitors to other countries to visit, thus increasing my knowledge of other countries.
Hawaii is one of my favorite places, Hawaii in the Pacific Ocean, Hawaii, the weather very hot, every year, many foreigners visit to Hawaii, so I will plan a very fun journey, first of all, I would take tourists to the waikiki
beach, which is one of the largest number of tourist attractions go, people enjoyed the sun and the beaches, people will go to the beach to swim in the summer, if you like to stimulate the point, then you can choose to surfing, waikiki beach is definitely one of the best surfing good place, if you like a static point; that you can enjoy the sun on the beach, this is very the enjoyment.
In the vicinity of waikiki beach, there are many hotels to choose from, Hawaii is definitely a good place to vacation. Vacation benefits is to let people have a good rest, so I often go to other places to relax myself.

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Jenkin

2009-12-10 6:47 am

✔ 最佳答案

嘩，唔單只係Chingish咁簡單，幫你唔係問題，請自己認真找人/英語學校學寫作。

I would like to work for the hospitality industry in Macau, which is a tourism-based town, so I need to know how to be a tour guide. When I graduate, I would first become a tour guide to take visitors to other countries, thus gaining my first-hand knowledge of other countries.

Hawaii is one of my favorite places in the world. Hawaii in the Pacific Ocean, In Hawaii, the weather is very hot. Every year, many foreigners visit Hawaii, so I will plan a very fun-filled journey. First of all, I would take tourists to the waikiki beach, which is a major tourist attraction, people can enjoy the sun and the beach, they can go swimming, or go surfing for more excitment. Waikiki beach is definitely one of the best surfing places. If you like to enjoy a quite afternoon, you can sun-bath on the beach just for relaxation. In the vicinity of Waikiki beach, there are many hotels to choose from.

Hawaii is definitely a good place for vacation. Being away from home and work allows people to have a good rest, so I often go to other places to relax myself.

2009-12-09 22:50:25 補充：
Hawaii is in the Pacific Ocean. (missed this sentence)

Consdier:

Hawaii, which is in the Pacific Ocean, is one of my favourite places in the world.

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