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This picture describes a man . The man's hair is level style, without any hair on his forehead and no sideburns. His eyes are brown and big, lined with several wrinkles near his eyes. Above his eyes there's a pair of eyebrows, which are really black and thick . He also has a baby face. It's really chubby. I Think while he was a child , he's so cute and lovely. But if he doesn't smile , people will think he's so serious.

This picture describes a man. The man’s hair style is SKINHEAD（平頭裝） .Without and hair on his FOREHEAD（額頭） and without any SIDEBURNS（的水）. His eyes is brown and big, near his eyes has several WRINKLES（魚尾紋）. Above his eyes there’s a pair of eyebrows, it’s really black and thick . He also has a baby face. It’s really FATTY（豐滿）. I Think while he was a child, he’s so cute and lovely, But if he don’t smile, people will think he’s so serious.

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This picture describes a man. He has a skinhead, no hair on his forehead, and without any sideburns. He has got big brown eyes, and with wrinkles around. There is a pair of really black and thick eyebrows right above his eyes. He also has a baby face - it’s really fatty! I think when he was a child, he’s so cute and lovely. But he looks so serious when he doesn’t smile.

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This picture describes a man who is in a flat hair style. There is no hair on his forehead or at both sides of his face. He has big brown eyes with several crow's feet near them. There's a pair of eyebrows above his eyes which is really black and thick. He looks young and his face is really plump. I guess he was a very cute and lovely child. But if he don't smile, people will think he's a cool guy.

This picture is describes a man. The man's hair style is flat head installation. Without hair on his forehead, also without any water(唔明). His eyes is brown and big, near his eyes has several crow's feet. Above his eyes there's a pair of eyebrows, it is really black and thick. He also has a baby face. It's really plump! I Think while he was a child, he's so cute and lovely, but if he don't smile, people will think he's so cool !