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2009-12-09 5:15 am
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There are four seasons in a year.In spring,The weather is warm,have many flower bloom,I think this weather have many people like because spring are not cold and hot.In summer,the weather is dry,many people will go to swim because summer is very hot,but some people want to lie in bad,In autumn,The weather is wet,is hiking good time,In winter,the weather is cold,have some area can snow because it is very cold in December.

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2009-12-09 6:00 am
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There are four seasons in a years.In spring,the weather is warm.It have many flowers bloom.I think many people like this weather because spring are not cold and hot.In summer,the weather is dry.Many people will go to swim because summer is very hot,but some people want to lie in bad.In autumn,The weather is wet.It is good time for hiking.In winter,it is cold.It have some area can snow because it is very cold .




可能都有少少錯,,but我已改左大部份你錯既words.
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2009-12-09 1:04 pm
There are four seasons in a year. In the spring, the weather is warm and many flowers bloom. I think people love this weather because it is neither too cold nor too hot. The weather is dry in the summer. Many people will go swimming because it is very hot, but some people prefer to lie on the bed. The weather is wet in the autumn which is a perfect time for hiking. In the winter, the weather is very cold and some areas will even snow.
2009-12-09 6:40 am
There are four seasons in a year.
In spring, the weatheris warm, flowers bloom. I think there are many people who like spring because it is not cold nor hot.

In summer, many people would like to go swimming because summer is quite hot, also some people would like to stay in bed.

In autumn, the weather is a bit dry, it's a good time for hiking.

In winter, the weather is cold, some regions may even snow since it is very cold in the mid-winter time.



Forgive me saying this, some of the concepts are wrong, or are you living in the southern atmosphere?
No matter what, I correct that for you, hope this can help.

2009-12-08 22:41:43 補充:
In autumn, the weather is a bit dry, it's a good time for hiking.


In autumn, the weather is a bit dry, it is a good time for hiking.


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參考: myself, myself


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