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Music Day 2009 was held on Dec 7 2009 in Jockey Club of Poly University, which is
located in Hung Hom . The adjudicators for the Music Day were
Cedric Chan, Pluto Chu, as well as other guests from America, Lynette, Megan
and Andrea. I like Gospel solos .I rememered there was a girl singing
gospel, but I forgot the name of the song.
She sang sweetly and her
voice touched me. The other performance disappointed me because they did not sing that good. I hope the next Music Day will be better than this one.

Music Day 2009 was held in Jockey Club in Poly University which is located in Hung Home on Dec 7 2009.Music Day' adjudicator have Cedric Chan, Pluto Chug even more the guests from America Lynette, Megan and Andréa. I like Gospel solo singing .I remembered has a girl singing gospel, but I forgot the song name.
She sang very sweet had her voice to touching me. Other part made me disappoint, because they sang not very good. I hope next Music Day will than this Music Day to be good.