tore and tear???

2009-12-07 12:01 am
She had gone after she tore the contract.
她撕掉 contract, 之後就走了,,
She had worked in this company before she died for over twenty years.
她死了超過二十年,之前就在這公司工作.
The contract was tore by Sausam, I have just saw many wastepaper like dancing in the air.
Sausam 撕掉 contract 我只見到紙碎在空氣像飛舞一樣..


How about the aforementioned sentences grammar is wrong?

回答 (3)

2009-12-07 12:07 am
✔ 最佳答案
She had gone after tearing the contract. (時式錯誤)

She had worked in this company for twenty years before she died. (意思模糊)

The contract was torn by Sausam. I have just saw bits of wastepaper dancing in the air. (Wrong form of verb, missing connective, extra word, countability)
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2009-12-07 5:07 am
She had gone after she tore the contract(錯,she went after she had torN the contract. past perfect is more early than past tense )

She had worked in this company before she died for over twenty years.(tense is ok, but there is a mistake that for over 20 years is for present perfect tense,using since 20 years ago.)


The contract was torN by Sausam, I have just saw many wastepaper like dancing in the air.(錯 past tense and present perfect are Not match. 應該I just SAW)


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