麻煩大家幫我加d野同埋改改篇英文作文!!20分~~

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以下紅色都是本人改的，以供參考︰

In a cold, dark moonless night, Jessie and Coco lost their way in a deep dark forest. They walk and walk on the way and meet many skulls. At the same time, the skull issues bray a harsh sound. They felt very scared and immediately screamed loudly. Their bodies were shivering. They ran away quickly. And then, they meet the vampire.

They fainted onto the floor. At that time, the vampire wanted to assault them. Just a second after, the superman appeared and saved them. They fought together. Unluckily, the superman stepped onto a tissue on the floor and slid towards the vampire. The vampire bit him with the speed of light. The superman was changed into a vampire, as the superman’s blood was sucked by the vampire.

Jessie and Coco could not fight back as they were very weak. They struggled for the way to go but failed. Eventually, the moon suddenly came out from the sky. The moon released some energy through a light beam onto the bodies of Jessie and Coco. They became vampires as well. After that, they wanted to assault the person who passed the forest.

Just then, the forest was appeared with some messages about vampires by some strange sounds. The forest was cursed by the vampires…

由於大大用得太多 After xxxxx，所以我幫你改為其它的 phrases，以上都只供參考的。