My occupation???

I am a salesperson of a retail company and I have to wear the uniform.

*** retail 本身就是形容詞, 而 retailing 是"零售業" 的意思, 不要畫蛇添足.
*** 句中的which 是company 的關係代明詞, 那麼公司何來需要穿制服. 改正的方法有兩個, 如下:
1.) 在 needs 後面加入對像即一個 object, 例如: the staff. 因此改為......which needs the staff to wear uniforms.
2.) 索性把 which needs wearing 改為 and I have to wear the uniform.


My company mainly sells all kinds of adult clothes (including shirts and trousers) .

*** sale 是名詞, 不能加個-s 當動詞用, 要改為 sells.
*** 另外 clothes 是衣服是已經包括了所有上身和下身的服飾, 勉強可加入 including shirts and trousers.


My (job) duties are to describe the clothing materials, suggest or recommend suitable clothings for our clients and collect the payments.

*** job 可以省略, job duty 通常用於招聘廣告或者個人簡歷 (resume).


以後只要在注意一下詞類, 和在語句運用時不要過份口語化就可以了.


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