I work in a retailing company. I am a salesman. My company is based in centre of Hong Kong which have five branch from 香港各區. Every company has twelve staff but main company has twenty. My company is located in Causeway bay.
我在零售公司工作,我是一個 salesman. 我的總公司在香港中環,還有五間分行座落香港各區, 每一間公司有十二名員工,而總公司則有二十名員工, 我工作地點就在銅鑼灣.
唔該幫我改改 grammar..thank you so much.