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This is my first geography’s survey. I think this is my worst survey I had never did since I had less prep of this survey.

We didn’t know about Sheung Wan a lot.

At the beginning, we spent lots of time in the place we went there first. One of my teammate said he wanted to look around that place so we followed but when we looked around for about 5 minutes. Then, we wanted to compete with times. Lucky, we did it.

At lunchtime, teammates and I followed the map which was given by teacher to go McDonald’s but we can’t find it! I felt helpless that time. Finally, we went to nearly supermarket to buy sushi and I sat near Grand Millennium Plaza to degust it. This sushi was sensational food I had never ate.

After the survey, I couldn’t writ quickly so I left over near the canteen and did my part I hadn’t do.

I had little bit upset as I want to study my homework very soon and I felt little bit satisfied as I got a experience of getting lost and I learned “In doing we learn” and “In fair weather prepare for foul”.


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