英文作文的文法,內容~急..thx

Miss 比GE題目:whats the value of passing down tradition chinese culture,such as...?
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Every country has one's own traditional culture, China is no exception.Each tradition of China has unique meaning.The paper cutting is one of the folk art of China,People living in poverty in the past , so, most colors of the paper cutting adopt the red one. because it represents lucky and joyous meaning.

Paper cuttings are used for religious rites,decorating and plastic arts,etc. This ancient art will not only reflect the temperament of people everywhere, customs, life, religious ceremonies and other differences, but also the imprint of the historical era

Few men, drinking a rivulet,stopped to consider its source. We is it go down to spread tradition, not only a skill, but spirit spreads. Everybody will have one's own the past, one has not gone over, then how he studies from the past failure. The country is the same too and the tradition is a part in the past.Paper cutting does not survive independently, but the one that integrate in other arts.

My father liked telling me some their interesting episodes in the past while as a child,which is also related with the paper cuttings. My father prepares for New Year with grandmother, buy some ornaments.grandmother bought paper cuttings that year, my father says he is looking at that person's paper cuttings live. But every little bit is disappearing paper cuttings now

We can draw the culture of other countries, but we can't be corroded by the culture of other countries. More of a traditional art of attention and calls for, although there may be some bad name, For example: outdate.etc. We can not give up in order to enter the era of the country's traditional
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