各位英文高手幫下我翻譯編野.(急)>3<15點!

MY SUGGESTION:

Hello, my name is XXX.
You can call me XXX.
I am X years old.
I am studying in XXX school.
My favorite subject is English.
It is because I like reading English books.
I am a member of the long-jump team in my school.
There are four people in my family, including my daddy, mammy, grandma, and myself.
I hope to study in your school because of your school's good and effective teaching method. There are many different subjects for the students to choose.
As I am good at long jump, I think I can contribute to your sports team to get good results for your school in sports field.

' Hi! My name is xxx,
You can call me xxx,
This year x years old of I,
I study in xxxxx school,
My favorite subject is English,
Because I am easy to like reading the English books.
Our school team in the school is the long-jump,
There are my families, four persons, including my father, mum, mother-in-law and I ......
I want to enter your school because I think your teaching way is very good, and have many different subjects,
Because I am a long-jump team's I can get the medal at the sports meeting for your school in the school. '

「Hi!我叫xxx,
你可以叫我xxx,
我今年x歲,
我在xxxxx學校讀書,
我最喜歡的科目是英文,
因為我好喜歡閱讀英文圖書.
我在學校的校隊是跳遠,
我的家有四人,包括我爸爸,媽媽,婆婆和我......

我想入你校是因為我覺得你們的教學方式很好,並都有很多不同的科目,

因為我在學校是跳遠隊所以我可以在運動會上為你校取得獎牌.」

&ldquo;Hi! I call xxx,
you may call me xxx,
my this year x year old,
I study in xxxxx school,
I most like the subject is an English,
because I good like reading English books.
I in the school school team am the long jump,
my family has four people, including my daddy, mother, mother-in-law and I ......
I want to enter your school am because I thought your teaching way is very good, and all has very many different subjects,
because I in the school am the long jump team therefore I may obtain the medal at the games for your school.&rdquo;