幫我睇吓D句子岩唔岩??

2009-11-21 8:42 pm
唔該睇吓d句子岩唔岩!!
如果唔岩既話,講吓點解唔岩,謝

1.I buy a card give to my mother.

2.There has too many beautiful toys. I very like they.

3.He this morning ate some bread.

4.Because he is very clever,so he can get 100 marks,

5.Although John is late, but he know to do what.
更新1:

要番個岩既句子!!

回答 (3)

2009-11-21 9:56 pm
✔ 最佳答案
1.I buy a card give to my mother. *the verb [give] can not follow the object [card].
正確: I buy a card to give to my mother. *[to give to my mother] is an infinitive adverbial phrase describing the purpose of buying the card.

2.There has too many beautiful toys. I very like they. *This is a simple present tense so [are] should be used as the verb, not [has]. Since the author is obviously not complaining about too many toys, so [so many] is more appropriate. [They] can not be used as an object, it is [them].
正確: There are so many beautiful toys. I like them very much.

3.He this morning ate some bread. The adverbial of frequency/time (this morning) should not be placed in front of the verb (ate).
正確: He ate some bread this morning.

4.Because he is very clever,so he can get 100 marks, *It is inappropriate to start a sentence with [because], and in this case it is not necessary.
正確: He is very clever, so he can get 100 marks.

5.Although John is late, but he know to do what. *[Although] can not be used together with [but]. [What] cannot be placed at the end of a sentence before a full stop.
正確: Although John is late, he knows what to do.
參考: myself
2009-11-22 2:32 am
第2位仁兄的句子是最好的,文法+邏輯都很好

至於第1位...文法就不予置評了
你的英文也要修改一下
也不要怪我
2009-11-21 9:06 pm
1.you dont need my, because you already is her kids ( I buy a card and give to mom.)

2.has is past tences, you should use are . (There are too many beautiful toys, i love all).

3.You cant put He in the Front (This Morning he ate some Bread)

4.You should add some words to make this sentences smoother (Because he s very clever, so he can get 100 marks easyily)

5.Some Mistakes Even though John is Late, But he know what to do.

2009-11-21 13:07:53 補充:
你d英文要修改一下,好差-.-
PastTense

2009-11-21 13:08:22 補充:
不要怪我


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